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The Witch by =FeralBloodDragon:iconFeralBloodDragon:

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Do not startle the Witch.



The Witch and Left 4 Dead (c) to Valve (I believe)

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~teysak May 3, 2009, 2:44:39 PM
A grandes rasgos lo que le estaría faltando, sería algo así como la presencia. Tiene una sombra escasa y una textura nula, por lo que se ve algo sintético, reduciéndole puntos a VISION. Por lo que es la ORIGINALIDAD no hay mucho que reprochar desde mi punto de vista.

Por otra parte está la TÉCNICA. Realmente no sé con qué lo dibujaste y eso no es lo importante, pero los trazos que le dan forma al cuerpo son demasiado duros, o más bien rectos, dejando de ser naturales (eso no incluye los dedos). Excluyendo eso, las proporciones están bien...se me olvidaba ¿es ciclope?

En IMPACTO podría mejorar mucho con las texturas, ya que las luces están bien al igual que los contrastes.

A modo de concejo, sería bueno que relajaras el trazo para lograr una figura más armónica o acorde con lo que quieres representar y mejorar lo que son las texturas, ya que pueden llevarte a desarrollar un buen dibujo.
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~Nation-of-Death May 3, 2009, 2:19:06 PM
Hehehe....The only startle I wouldn't mind is a zoey startle...hehehe...That was an awesome picture >.>...er...Yours is too....^^;

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*ahem* ♫I'm like a sly fox; Ya can't catch me! You may try, but you won't suucceeeeed!♫ -©Me :P
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=FeralBloodDragon May 3, 2009, 2:23:40 PM
O.o Diiiiiiiiiiiirty mind you have. XD

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You think nothing is impossible? Try slamming a revolving door XD

'My Darkness' Comic: [link]
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~snowfyre May 3, 2009, 6:33:23 PM
Lol fun fun.
Witch... is funny.

Cr0wned :XD:

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"There's a reason why the word 'Supposed' was invented"

--> Snowfyre
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=FeralBloodDragon May 3, 2009, 11:15:27 PM
The witch *can* be funny... (Distinctly remembers making her dance to the flashing flashlight.) But she scared the pants off of me the first few times round. XD

I Cr0wnd her too!

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You think nothing is impossible? Try slamming a revolving door XD

'My Darkness' Comic: [link]
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~snowfyre May 3, 2009, 11:54:34 PM
Lol yes. witch fun. :XD:
Though Cr0wning her is hard and stupidly dangerous. :D


And it's funny when the AI specifically runs up to the witch and shoots her when you try so hard to avoid her..... :XD:

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"There's a reason why the word 'Supposed' was invented"

--> Snowfyre
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=FeralBloodDragon May 4, 2009, 12:58:54 AM
Hahaha. I know wnat you mean. Louis and his darn peelz...

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You think nothing is impossible? Try slamming a revolving door XD

'My Darkness' Comic: [link]
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~snowfyre May 4, 2009, 3:15:14 AM
Questionable AIs. :D

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"There's a reason why the word 'Supposed' was invented"

--> Snowfyre
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~Nation-of-Death Jun 9, 2009, 12:16:17 AM
Hey, I take lessons from the weird, outrageous, and history and fantasy.
To quote Tay Zonday;
Crash into weird.
Why? Life's too short. Get out there, be weird....be an arse....be you. And me? I'm an untrusting, cruel, tricky, talented, lazy, geeky, a*shole perv. I have no problems with that xD

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*ahem* ♫I'm like a sly fox; Ya can't catch me! You may try, but you won't suucceeeeed!♫ -©Me :P
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=FeralBloodDragon Jun 9, 2009, 8:00:48 AM
Uhhhhh huuuuuuhhhh... *Nods intelligently and Guts people on RF:G*

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You think nothing is impossible? Try slamming a revolving door XD

'My Darkness' Comic: [link]
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